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Knock out kings fur life
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IP:
Ihave to go with drama queen on this one.
SHe opened it up perfectly in this one and she gave me good imagry and her lines where good. Here is how I graded her
Led by Charon through water as black as oil and silent as death
Awaited confrontation with horrifying Cerberus similar to Seth
Distant wailing sent shiver down my spine,confidence undermined
Wise words of my father in mind but envied entire living mankind
For not having to undergo this struggle or to bid a last farewell
Many tried but only a pure soul could combat acid agonies of Hell
Safely reached the shore where I stood eye in eye with the creature
Had a dragon as a tail but viciousness was most remarkable feature
Another obstacle I overcame,fearless strength donated by the gods
So I finally arrived at point of no return,difficult by all odds
Heart filled with proud and relief as I gazed upon the bumpy road
I travelled,endless peace for this fighter's soul at last bestowed
9.9/10
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