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Voted For: Phantom
Phantom
Come on B, I mean, I know you're probably a nice guy at heart
But why is it that as soon as you came back C.S. fell apart?
^ LOL nice opener good punch to begin things also personal there too
I'm fresh with my shit, so you should prolly shut up and hear me yo
Cuz although ya state is New...I heard all ya punches years ago
Kinda foced the rhyme but the punch none the less aight
Ya chances are slim in the battle, I mean how long has it been?
I aint even talking bout regristrations when i say you May not win
^ Weak rhyme more of a slant rhyme but good wordplay and steady diss
So feel the punches with me, cuz nobody is gunna see you alive
You might have lyrical nirvana but Kurt Cobain committed suicide
^ Good punch nice connection wit 1st and 2nd line
See catch my flow dunny, ya weak punches will never float
What kinda guy sets up a battle where HE barely has min. posts to vote?
^ Nice closer good flow and nice rhyming
Overall
Nice verse Phan good flow struc aight in places and rhyming decent bar 1 place...decent punches good personal and aight wordplay
~babylon~[b]
If you thought phantom was a fag, you havent been lied to
Sad thing bout the battle, this dued knows more about me than I do
[b]^ No real punch not a strong diss no 1st, 2nd line connection coulda been a lot better openers are always important
He must have followed my career since it began on the net
Whats sadder, someone that lives online, or dick rides for respect
^ personal yes punch not a strong one but the diss is there though
his alias is groovy, socrates reached his peak, pretends to be new see
cuz hes mediocer to vets, but can be the big man around the newbies
^ Personal good like they way you put him down
and I knew see, hes jelly like, he shakes, and he's soft
boasts cuz he made tourney semi's , but why brag about shit u lost
^ Nice personal/punch i know all about that lol
thinks he'll git famous off the net, so i'll give him some closure
He got raped in the semi finals, to git his ass some exsposer
^ Good closer but coulda been worded better rhyme good though
Overall
Less punches more personals...but personals were good but not wow ya know...so ima give this to Phantom outta consistancy on his verse.
RTF on my sig vs Killah.Bwoy
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i'm still tryin to figure out how bein born in another country makes somebody fake.
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R.I.P OMB
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