Odi et Amo
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Voted For: Hammer
Death
this lil noobie just dont know/
im tight my flow keeps flowing like H2O/
^self-glorification: big no-no!
ill use my punchlines to break this nigga down to size/
fuckin around with me is a death wish and your bout to meet your demise/
^no punch
ill own this nigga with lyrical domination/
im real and your just a fake imatation/
^it'll do i guess
Weak drop in fact, had some lines who got potential of good punch or personal but it didn't came out that way. Vocab was good, structure could be slighty better though, just elevate...read other battles...no hate...
Hammer
Im not black or a rascist, he said im a nigger, I hate that
Dont make me bigger to say ur a wigger, u probaly aint black
^decent opener
Your Original Crap, its gay like you enamored with Seth*
Like you a toy, i play with you, you get hammered to death
^okay okay
Thinks he’s death himself causing plagues of locus**
Caught you staring at a ford for an hour cos it said “focus”
^nice closer
Overall good drop, maybe some more bold things in there but it's all good...Vocab, structure n flow were tight, nothing really bad in here, just keep on doing your thing!
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