Voted For: C.A.L.I

decent battle

punches- Cali, overall I felt yours made more sense, and hit a bit harder. Force, aight punches, but not the greatest I've ever seen, work on originality.

personals- Cali, had some decent personals in there, nothing that hard hitting. Force, not hard hitting personals. nothing that original, and not great material

multis- Neither

metas- Cali, mostly for having them, not great metas. Not very original. Force, no metas to really rate.

structure- Force, aight structure, not many stretched lines, but too many ..... Cali, too many stetched lines, and a lot of .... to make em fit.

flow- Cali, overall flowed better, the lines fit together, and kept on track. Force, aight flow, but fell off a couple of times, and not as good as Cali's.

humor-Cali, I smiled.

Cali, not your best battle. Work on your structure mostly. too many .....

Force, not your best either. Punches were played, and personals not hard hitting.

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