Voted For: Black Queen

Cheerios

Yo i kno im pretty good the test yes i just passed shit
I Blow portions of ya 'booty' so ur verse
.........u defenetly half assed it
-Not bad opener, only really using an ok punch, nothing more in it. 5/10
You got gats to blast off i'll light this task off and blow the track spot
This bitch is trying to prove she aint a man when her
.........breaths more furiocios than 'Shaqs' Cough
-Ok i suppose. Weak punch, using a metaphor but not really to great use. 4/10
You whack off its ok gurl a first loss is all you need indeed
My rec's gettin Bigger cause its like its been 8 weeks
.........after planting a sunflower seed
-Weak punch, didnt land and i wasnt feelin it at all. Sorry. 3/10
my flows so hot so thats somthing im gonna have 2 teach
yes ur structure lookin freaky and weird like seein
......... Missy elliot in bikini at the beach
-That is much more like it. Damn good closer i thought. Hard punch and landed. If only more of the verse could have been this good. 7/10


Black Queen

Cheerios's verses are written with chicken shit, cuz he 'carves in fear'
Like airplanes full of gay skydivers, i'm about To 'drop this queer'!
-Good opener. definately. Metaphor use with hard punch that landed. I was feeling this defo. 7/10
Men 'Rock' ya rear, makin ya feel hardcore With sword's stuck in you
My verse is like pornstars with virgins, cuz I'm bored 'fuckin You'!
-Quite cool. Ok filler, not-so-hard punch that definately landed but wasnt the best. 5/10
He forces more "shit" on his drops than a fatman with constipation,
his multis ''lose more purpose" than the times he faked a masterbation
-Ok i guess. Liked the set up but it was let down a little by the final punch. Seemed like a fake personal. 5/10
I'll give-em-heat when this battles done over, your sure to bitch-and-whine
all your skills are like 'mexicans', always below 'border-line'!
-Cool, liking this, quite a hard punch and it definately landed. 6/10
I'll make an example out of him, expose his "fake blackness"
He's a good lesson to learn from, as the definition of rap whackness//
-Heavy opener. You definately took this battle and using that closer just rubbed it in. 8/10


overall: Black Queen just came so heavier and much more clever. Right from the start there wasnt much of a contest. Good verse Black Queen

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