what up man , i peeped your ish ......


story telling- im not really feeling this , sounds like you need better samples, but i get the idea, had an alright melody , but some times sounded really cludered, but not bad at all , i wish you would put it as MP3 so i could hear the real quality of it, like put a vouice tag on it , cuz people can steal it right now any way if the wanted through the volume options that come with the computer lol

i dont really like the break downs you have in there .... dont know why , i just aint feeling it

After dark- You really need better sounds lol..... sounds like your just using like a casio or something..... i like the the thing in the back sounds like it has potential, but everything else .... just bleh lol not really feeling it ......its not bad though, just isnt real catchy

Grimey Rap-yet again you need better sounds lol, this on thing on here is ewwwwwww....your kick is thumping though.......not feeling this one at all ..... jsut doesnt come together for me ..........


well man Hit my new thread up please.... i gave you good feed.....

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=171869