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Old 01-13-05, 08:54 PM   #7
DeHotBwoy
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Voted For: Notorious Verses

JR freeze Nasty ass verse but it will be better when ur structure is good u kno how to fix that u need a trip to the tutorials any ways u had all tight ass lines i liked reading it from head 2 toe but what messed u up was like when u was sayin DAMNNNN and shit like that threw u off task work on ya struc


Notorious Verses
u had that 1 line that blew his fuckin lid off that george Gervin line was to ill lol
so ur structure wasn't as bad but it was bad and sum of ur punches didint hit as hard but u get this 1 by far from me
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