50: you had a decent verse... i expected alot more from you... seeing as though you have come pretty good the past couple weeks.. so i was dissapointed with this verse.. decent imagery, could have been better.. but your structure, flow, emotion, and imagery werent too good in this verse...

overall : 3/10

valor: you had a good verse... good imagery, decent vocab, the emotion was pretty good... good structure, you took this one easily

overall : 8.5/10

vote: valor

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