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drama queen i thought you had very good vocab. it definetly flowed good use of multeis could have been better. but you definatly had better vocab. i liked the imagery to. but i thought all the vocab kinda took away from the emotion.


to me white ave just won on emotion. but he could have put better vocab in there. but it definetly flowed and pretty good imagery. but yeah his pure emotion did it for me, and thats what topicals are for.......to make you feal........

v/white

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