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Old 01-13-05, 11:15 PM   #8
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Voted For: .Wicked One.

Nice Battle Both Came Hard With Punches And Vokab

Wickedone,Iight Ya 1st Lines Didn't Rhyme Cus..You Had Hard Hittin Punches,Nice Vokab I Didnt Cee No Personals 4rm You Ya Strukture Wass Well Balanced Easy Ta Read.Overall Have Some Better Personals Ya Vokab Wass Pretty Good.Elivate Ya Punches Personals And Openors Cus...

Ill Ya Shit Wass Hott To,Ya Strukture Wass Off Tho Some Bars Wass 2 Long.You Had A Few Good Punches Most Didn't Hit Hard You Had Personals But They Wasn't Really Direkted Ta Him.You Didn't Have N e Vokab Up That And Have Some Direkt Punches Ta Words Him Cus..

/V .WickedOne. Rtf............
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