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Old 01-14-05, 02:05 AM   #10
Wickedclown
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Voted For: MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ

aight this was an aight battle... both of yall had some good points and some bad points so imma break it down for u right here:

Death: ya shit was aight... i didnt like the structure at all.. shit hurt ya flow and all but it was aight... punches and personals were there but could have been a bit better... they were aight but could have hit harder.. the Jay-z line was played... good vocab tho... it was sorta creative i suppose... overall 4/10

Mista... GREAT STRUCTURE.... i was feelin it... i like it centered but thats just me, it helps the flow and gets it all goin.... flow was tight... personals were tight as fuck... punches could of hit harder... vocab was good.... the closer was dope... overall tight verse... 6.5/10

aight this was an aight battle... both of yall did aight but mista got this one... no hate to either of u....

Vote- Mista