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Old 01-14-05, 05:22 AM   #7
Ca'lam
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i coudlnt figure out who who was who LOL....


so first verse - nice flow.. rhyme scheme is nice.. accent is so heavy hehe.. its original tho word.. everything is good.. but that accent is so, contradicting lol



second verse - Good shit also... same accent thing..

ya tracks are always good. flow is solid for the most part.. you got nice rhyme schemes.. you just have a really heavy accent, thats taxing on the ear na mean ? but the shit is nice man.. iunno.. i liked it at least.. i dont rate songs numer wise.. but i was feelin this joint. nice drop..
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