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Old 01-14-05, 09:27 AM   #41
DjPlAiMaKa
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Reloaded
Ur verse was aight, ur punches were okay, i didnt like ur opener but nice closure. U need to work on ur flow and multis, u dont have any in there. And use better vocabulary.

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u were 2 simplistic, ur vocabulary sucked, flow was off and punches were pretty dam weak
u need to elevate
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