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Voted For: DjPlAiMaKa
lol a one sided battle in my eyes... imma break it down now...
Dio Deus...
you say 50 sucks just like young buck,
gangsta, you probably better? no way you ain't no doubt
^^ ok wack opener... didn't rhyme and no punch 1/10
why don't you see you have to look out and watch yo mouth
and why would you be proud
and again no punch... 1/10
that you got a cheap-ass selling-bad gamecube
what you suck my deep cash havin man hate you
^^ eh?? i dont get it 2/10
cause you talkin bout it's bad to have cash
just because we work harder then your dad's ass
^^ nope. you really need to elevate 1/10
I flow even better than the tidal wave at the indian ocean
but you probably won't understand cause your brains work at slowmotion
^^ better... good vocab there... 5/10
I punch you so hard in your stomach you finally learn how to spit
and one day you gon' thank me for what I did
^^ mope the last line ruined it... 2/10
ryt you really need to elevate alot.... try looking at the tutorials in the help forums...
DjPlAiMaKa...
I tear u up to "pieces and bits"/
Word on the street is u faka than "silicone tits"/
lol alright punch but couldav been better 4/10
U look like a cyclone hit u with "lyrical shit" D/
It looks like ur meant to be losing to me, on RV/
not feeling this one at all... 2/10
U lyrically declined, verbally disabled/
So I labeled u retarted, "special ed", only place u could be stable/
lol alryt punch a bit of wordplay 5/10
Ur like a laxative, u just "burst out shit"/
U "drop in decrease", like a "reverse stock split"/
nice punch... 7/10
Dio Deus u say u tha bomb?/
I'll diffuse u twice, before u can even say that im wrong/
nahhh not feeling it... bad closure... 3/10
overall i think this was a one sided battle... both ya'll need to elevate though...
no you can see i have taken my time to vote on your battle PROPERLY can you please do the same with my battle please...
links are in the sig... no hate.
Ima a Hitman Solja, u cant fuck wit this//
U cant even cum yet, u just "hold back pis"/
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