YEAH THIS WAS ALL RIGHT PLEASE PEEP MY VERSE NEED FEEDBACK

slow down my car and flow nouns bazaar// like grammar teachers and hammer creatures// on microphones, my pride lame as I divide brains// into seperate parts with this desparate art// like a proper doctor during surgery, don't worry about this flurry of rhymes dun,I'll stitch a bitch use needlework on a feeble jerk//