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Old 01-14-05, 02:01 PM   #16
SUPERVILLAIN
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hahahahahahahaha.

overall, this verse was pretty funny. i like the personals and the punches the best. you had nice structure, smooth flow and wordplay as well.....keep up the good work. hold it down. oner.

.....i know cali's coming any second now........lol.............

s.v........c.s.
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