ok dq had a better story and since this is a topical that usually wins it she had better imagery as well which also wins topicals she also had better vocab in here too which is a plus now whyte ave had better emotion but less visuale picture and story to his which would have helped him take this in poetry but really dont do it for me in a topical where i tend to go with the person with a better story which is dq.
vote-dq

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