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Old 01-14-05, 04:25 PM   #24
MaRVJay
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Voted For: Murkz

u got dis fam.......u had a betta ryhme scheme and a few nice punchlines..but ya structure is crazee lol fix dat shit...umm 8 ya verse was kind of basic nothinr eallu stood out..u had a cool structure but overall ya verse wasn't enuff 2 win dis

opener-murkz
structure-8
punchlines-murkz
creativity-murkz
multis-nun
wordplay-murkz had a lil
personals-nun
finisher-murkz
enjoyed-murkz.....nuff said

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