Voted For: d.j em sce

I Think D.J Came in this one with a Little Slide.

He had good lines and nice good story. It Told about a good relationship making me read more. I noticed some pretty good Vocabulary and you didnt try to go alot of it in their. It was not more like peomly like to have me thinking and pretty good flow but not to good. Scheme was pretty aight also.

Flow Intelligent
You had a good story and yours was more peomly like. But his told me more about the relationship to let me know whats really going on and how deep emotions are being delt. You had better voabulary and nice good flow and scheme and some Motion going on their in the movement of how it goes. But yall was close and if it is really for me to decide I would say it is a tie. But for me I think D.J. Won This

v/D.J.

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