Voted For: MaRVJay1009
MaRVJay1009 had this. I liked his first 4 lines. Reall dope.
its a easy win dis lame should just 4-fit,i aint gonna force shit.
but all u do is "pop-shit" like u took ya "gun & aimed at a toilet"
whut u know bout breakin da law bitch,you taken a lose quick
u tried out 4 enternal illness i saw da roster & ya name wasn't on it*
Nice ^^^
Your flow was off and structure was weak. Work on that you will always get props like me. lol. If i had to rate your verse I would rate it 8/10
You didn't come that hard but you were still flowing better.
TWMC
you were simple. Try not to say
im hungry for MC's, off this bout i'll b feedin
treat ya like Artest, ya punches get u kicked out for the season
dog its no doubt you'll be screamin
or you would b if ya didnt have a damn mouth full of semen
That was a weak opener and your closer was worst. You don't really got a dope style of rhyming and hitting properly with punches. But you'll elevate. lol.
if i was to rate your verse i would rate it 4/10
So I guess MaRVJay1009 gets this.
RTV in my muh fucking sig.