Voted For: Kordozar

ah good battle....very close battle
Kordozar

Kid Talks Ta Him Self,So We Know He's Gay..
Can't Get A Fair Win,Thass Why His Votes Are Swayed..
I'll Hold His Wins Ta A Minimun Amount Like His Posts Per Day..
^^^that was an alright punch. good wordplay included in it. i'd give it a 7/10 cuz one line in their was a little streched.

Go Away,Cus Mictorious Would Never Suceed...
He Stood Up Ta Chaos,But Fell Ta His Knees...
^^^^nice idea, nice punch, could've worded it better doe.. 8/10

Leave This Kid Feed,And He Still Won't Be Eating..
Tha Closets He'll Get Ta Dope Iss Drug Addict Meetings..
^^^decent punch, nice wordplay, second line didnt go wit the first one doe man
Won't Leave Me Bleeding,He Have No Real Punches..
..............And He's All Pussi Like Female Brunches....
I'll Leave You Lump Kid,Like Notre Dame's Hunch Iss....
^^^ur best lines of your whole battle was ur closing which is a plus (+). 10/10 closing. very good closing

Mictorious
Mic's Lyrical-Sword will leave Zar stopp'd like I was Pullin-His-Kord
The judges could give him a |hand-job| and still not be |feelin-him-more|
^^^very good punch, nice multis and wordplays. nice intro man, 9/10

Everyone knows your-not-great...Like 'voters both agreeing i won' dawg theres-no-debate..
cuz like "unconfident girls about there bodys"...you Just Think Your A heavyweight...||
^^^ahhhh....couldve been worded betta, but nice idea and good punch...8/10

I'll come to a Michigan orphanage, and i'll be killin' a bunch..
Cuz like "Victorious kickboxers", I'll "KO" this rookie "without a punch.."
^^^its aite, but the second line saved you, because that first line was ass man, 6/10

I Corbra-Clutch pussies like u with surgical precision
and have u gagged and face-masked wit hollow tips,leaving ur neck wit split-decisions
^^^great usage of words, but the second line was streched man....work on dat...but it was good wordplay
8.5/10

yous gettin slayed-apart, watch me reck this bitch wit heat thatll open him
cuz kord's chances of winnin are |slimmer| than |anorecsick-ethiopians
^^^dat was a hot closing. the second line was really good truss me. ill give it 9/10


man basically in the end it came down to punches and the closing of the verses. i think the punches went to mictorious but K's closing was way betta. so i had to go to structure and K had betta structure man and his wording was betta, but Mic had betta wordplay and multis. so personals went to no one. but i think K took dis one only because of structure man!
v/Kordozar

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