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Old 01-15-05, 01:10 AM   #11
Ike
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Voted For: .MictoriouS.

pretty good battle here

Mictorious............
Mic's Lyrical-Sword will leave Zar stopp'd like I was Pullin-His-Kord
The judges could give him a |hand-job| and still not be |feelin-him-more|
decent opener....hit hard....good wordplay....6/10

Everyone knows your-not-great...Like 'voters both agreeing i won' dawg theres-no-debate..
cuz like "unconfident girls about there bodys"...you Just Think Your A heavyweight...||
good concept....hit hard again....good bar.....7/10

I'll come to a Michigan orphanage, and i'll be killin' a bunch..
Cuz like "Victorious kickboxers", I'll "KO" this rookie "without a punch.."
didnt like the set up line.....2nd line was nice......5/10

I Corbra-Clutch pussies like u with surgical precision
and have u gagged and face-masked wit hollow tips,leaving ur neck wit split-decisions
lol....good bar....i usually dont like gunplay in a punch....but this was nice.....8/10

yous gettin slayed-apart, watch me reck this bitch wit heat thatll open him
cuz kord's chances of winnin are |slimmer| than |anorecsick-ethiopians
decent....kinda played.....4/10

30/50................................

Kordozar.............
Kid Talks Ta Him Self,So We Know He's Gay..
Can't Get A Fair Win,Thass Why His Votes Are Swayed..
I'll Hold His Wins Ta A Minimun Amount Like His Posts Per Day..
never use a bar with 3 lines.....1st line was horrible....2nd line was decent...and 3rd line was a pretty good personal.......8/15

Go Away,Cus Mictorious Would Never Suceed...
He Stood Up Ta Chaos,But Fell Ta His Knees...
ok personal....could have been worded better....sut still decent....6/10

Leave This Kid Feed,And He Still Won't Be Eating..
Tha Closets He'll Get Ta Dope Iss Drug Addict Meetings..
hmm ok.....5/10

Won't Leave Me Bleeding,He Have No Real Punches..
..............And He's All Pussi Like Female Brunches....
I'll Leave You Lump Kid,Like Notre Dame's Hunch Iss....
again...3lines in a bar...not good......1st line ok...2nd line....better.....3rd line....not feelin it......8/15


27/50...........................


i felt like the was a pretty close battle....but mic got it...his punches were more complex that kordozars....kordozar came with harder personals....but overall mic got it with consistency....there were a couple lines i wasnt feelin from kor.......good battle from both though.....no hate in this vote.....rtf
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