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Old 01-15-05, 02:17 AM   #12
MaRVJay
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Voted For: Kordozar

aight i gota go with u fam...bcuzz u had a betta structure shit was easier da read...ya verse was kind of basic but u ahd a few persoanls is there so dat help u take dis shit..mic fix ya structure fam shit was all ova da place nahmean...ya secnobd bar was type hott but dat was it no personals u had a few multis but i wasn't feelin dem really...so kord took dis with a good structure and personals..

return it...ya'll
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