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Old 01-15-05, 02:36 AM   #12
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Voted For: MaRVJay1009

Ok Battle 2 Much Readin Ta Do....
Openor=Marv,Otha Kids Wass Self Gloryfin
Strukture-Twmc,Marv Had Stretched Lines
Punches=Marv Had Stronger Punches
Personals=Marv And He Explained His Personals
Vokab=Tie Both Had Some Vokab
Closer=Marv,Good Personals Punch And Closer

Marv Took This Cus He Came Harder Wasn't Bein Self Glorified Like Twmc Wass Tha 1st Line Or So..Marv Also Had Consictency Through Out His Entire Verse.Onli Thing His Strukture Wass Off In Some Places Keep Ya Strukture Ta Getha Dont Stretch Ya Lines...............
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