Voted For: Sovereign

man u crazy
bust'n them flow
try'n to battle me
well hea i go

^^^filler.....not too nice of a set up...sorry.

com on if u think u can
out flow me
using ur band
well just c

^^^no.....im sorry.

whos betta or whos not
cuzz u gonna lose to me
wither i win or not
i'll always come back to c
if u can out beat me

^^^nothing here either.

blu...
work on punches, multies, metaphors, vocab, flow and structure. try practicing in open mic before you jump into the text battling bruh.


get off my nutz.......................you fuckin wack rhyme whorder
his ass is realy on fire but its because hes the bench warmer

^^^not really feelin' it, but it had potential. lol....you spelled word-er wrong.

Watch me draw lines round this bastard, slip n' snap necks
This kid Needs to Buy World War Recounts to receive Veteran Text.

^^^okay...but not too hard.

Sick of this Math Geek With no Skills to be had,chance to be grabbed
i may as well Rape You With Knifes the way this Asshole Gets Stabbed//

^^^eh. nothing sensational but acceptable.

sov...
you at least had some punches and multies in your verse...but you need some work as well. try to focus on wording your lines/punches better...it'll help out. also, try to up the vocab a little, r.v. likes that. your structure was on point....nice.

keep doing your thing fellas........good luck on r.v. one.


...the super........c.s.

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