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Old 01-15-05, 05:23 AM   #9
~Babylon~
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Voted For: Skriptz

ok..............

skriptz-i thought you had a good verse overall..........multeis were there and in good use didnt over do it.........good rhyme scheme structer...........punches were hard hittin........and consistant

kordozar- i thought your verse was all over the map with all puctuation...........................punches were ok not any killers........structer was iffy..........but ok verse overall.....

v/skriptz

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