Voted For: Skriptz
ok..............
skriptz-i thought you had a good verse overall..........multeis were there and in good use didnt over do it.........good rhyme scheme structer...........punches were hard hittin........and consistant
kordozar- i thought your verse was all over the map with all puctuation...........................punches were ok not any killers........structer was iffy..........but ok verse overall.....
v/skriptz
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