ya chorus for the first link-Whoo Bangin.. = i wasn't feeling that, you have a good voice for the beat.. emotion was ok... delivery was str8.. but work on ya lyrics they sound extra basic.. like "this is my sheet, i fold it up neat".. it's kinda too simple... and when i say simple i don't mean go run to get the dictionary that won't help, ya know.. just find a creative way to say things without going str8 to the point.. use metaphors some word-play, maybe a few multis..

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