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Old 01-15-05, 11:20 AM   #1
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Voted For: Kordozar

MIC::


Mic's Lyrical-Sword will leave Zar stopp'd like I was Pullin-His-Kord
The judges could give him a |hand-job| and still not be |feelin-him-more|
Not feelin that opener

Everyone knows your-not-great...Like 'voters both agreeing i won' dawg theres-no-debate..
cuz like "unconfident girls about there bodys"...you Just Think Your A heavyweight...||
not feelin that either

I'll come to a Michigan orphanage, and i'll be killin' a bunch..
Cuz like "Victorious kickboxers", I'll "KO" this rookie "without a punch.."
Meh

I Corbra-Clutch pussies like u with surgical precision
and have u gagged and face-masked wit hollow tips,leaving ur neck wit split-decisions
that also was meh, lol.

yous gettin slayed-apart, watch me reck this bitch wit heat thatll open him
cuz kord's chances of winnin are |slimmer| than |anorecsick-ethiopians
Good closer, best line in the verse

KORDOZAR::

Kid Talks Ta Him Self,So We Know He's Gay..
Can't Get A Fair Win,Thass Why His Votes Are Swayed..
I'll Hold His Wins Ta A Minimun Amount Like His Posts Per Day..
I liked that opener, made me laugh.
Go Away,Cus Mictorious Would Never Suceed...
He Stood Up Ta Chaos,But Fell Ta His Knees...
An ok line
Leave This Kid Feed,And He Still Won't Be Eating..
Tha Closets He'll Get Ta Dope Iss Drug Addict Meetings..
heh
Won't Leave Me Bleeding,He Have No Real Punches..
..............And He's All Pussi Like Female Brunches....
I'll Leave You Lump Kid,Like Notre Dame's Hunch Iss....
alright closer, could have been better but I liked it.

Overall I liked Kordozars verse better, I feel he came wit stronger punches. I also don't like all that shit u put in your verse, Mic. like the |'s and shit... it's annoying.
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