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Voted For: Spektikul
Emotion: This i give to Spektikul... You had really good emotion here.. Nice and strong... It really drew me in the more i redthe more i kept wanting to read the piece over and over... Very good emotion
Imagery: Again im going to have to give this to Spektikul... Your imagery here was very well portraid... This pieces imager was good and it painted a vivid picture in my mind and thats always a puls
Vocabulary: This i give to Verbal Abuse... I am told that i have some of the best vocab on these 2 sites and your vocab was really amazing... i mean it wasnt really complex or anything like that but it was best outa the two verses and it was very good...
Creativity: Spektikul takes this catagory aswell... Your story really drew me in as i read and was verry original... i didnt really like the approach you took with your piece Verbal...
vote: Spektikul for the above reasons and having 3 outa the 4 catagories... Very good pieces the both of you... makes me wanna get back into writing topicals
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