i dont know about this one. Yo structure wasnt there fam. u had some stretched lines. i think u should just keep battlin people, so u can elevate, cause i started out just like that. your rhymes were a lil simple, and ur barz were stretched. oh, i said that, but i wasnt feelin this. i dont know what tha moral of this was. i dont know what to tell u about this one. u should elevate more, and practice. this wasnt hot to me...sry fam...u still got skillz tho....................1