Voted For: .MictoriouS.

overdoze..........
You On The High Way To Hell Buh Yoh There Aint No Rest-Stops
Dawg Ya Can't Turn Back Now Just Because This Thread's Red-Hot
nope
Ya Cant Spit I Aint Ever Seen You Throw A Real Direct-Shot
You Never Wanna 'Start' Unless It's On Your Computer Desktop!!!!
nice try
But Lets-Not Go Ahead And Take This Battle To Drastice-Measures
You 'Playin A Part' You Cant Handle So You Needa Get Ya Act-Together!
ehhh...couldve been written much betta
You A Whack-Contendor... You Dont Belong Like The Ugly-Duckling
If You Had The Hands Of God, You Still Wouldnt Be Touching-Nothing
damn that was played
Im Just-Disgusting So You Gotta Try Ya Absolute Best-To-Win
So You'll Probaly 'Pussy' Out Coz I Know You Got That Estrogen
nope........
Coz To Me.... You Just Another One Of My Faceless-Chumps
You Shouldnt Have Accepted This If You Cant Take-A-Punch
But The Only Time You 'Serve' Kids Is When You Make-They-Lunch!!!!
best bar......................still sucked

2/10.......elevate alot......

Mictorious

..Ya verse is Garnished-Junk..
'Take That Trash Back Where You Found It'..like 'Reversing The Service Of A Garbage-Dump' !!
lol....that was good...nice opener...fix tha structure
..Ima Rest-This-Phony; and leave Ovadose "Witness To His Own Death"
Like "Resurected Murder Victims In Testamony"..!!
nice.......had no flow......and fix tha structure
..He's Already Dosed Heavy-Leaded' How Do I Know? Cause He Name-Name-Already-Says-It
Spit Some More? Nah. Your name already says how The-Battle-Ended !!
ehhhh...na...repition is bad...not a good flow...bad struct.
I see 'small fries' in 'Super-Sizes', but nobody knows who this chick or Guy-Is,
So i'll 'Jam-Over Ya Awarness With A Sexual Indentity' and leave His 'Gender Full Of Surprises' !!
holy fucking shit...ladies n gentlemen...thats a wrap

\V/-mictorious for too many good punches...lol...get at me on aim for help wit ya structure man...i think u need it

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