Voted For: .MictoriouS.

over.....

basically the only thing good about your verse was your multis and your structure.....you had 2 decent bars in the middle but the rest were wack and didnt hit very well.....no hate...you have potential....just elevate.....

Mic........
work on your structure man....its fucked up and hard to read...i could see someone voting against you just for that........but your had pretty good vocab....your punches hit harder.....you had better concepts through your whole verse......

i thought you both came pretty weak....not a very fun battle to read...but mic got this with better and more complex punches.............

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