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Old 01-16-05, 10:53 AM   #54
Flamin Barz
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Voted For: d.j em sce

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when i get in the textin section everybody knows im legendary
I win battle bcuz when it comes 2 spitten evrything else is secondary
kid im fresh and ur stale.....but ill admit it u got balls`
if ur a stable person im bout to make sure u take a fall`
Even if u smoked a blunt on a train u still couldn’t blaze a track
U like a sperm guzzling hoe da way u never spit any cum baks
this kid is lame he is to plain all your rhymes are basic
i up the vocab and acuzate that you cant envison my phisical matrix

pretty cool verse - you had some aight punches - attempts at wordplay - a little creativity and your structure was aight - 6/10

RR
Half asleep, 13, i'm still whoopin your ass
Ya rhymes break mine like cement and shatter ya glass
Ya lines is a brutal crash you a 2 sided bitch flip flopping
The farthest you'll ever go in music will be a disc jockey
This bitch cocky sayin i'm wack but only looks at his reflection
How you even set this up when you postin Open Mics in the Audio Section
I'm teachin you a lesson, correction records don't mean shit
You only got a good rec cuz you battle newbies or ya rhymes is bit
You can't see me not even a glitch your rap ability is deductible bitch
Even if it wasn't it'd still be destructible shit

your verse was kinda weak - i kinda wasnt feelin some of your punches - your wordplay wasnt hittin and your verse was a little to basic - 4.5/10
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