ur stuc. is torn all to hell! kinda put it in sum kinda of format........like
1st line.... If you were here with me, we could do so many things together as I love you more than ever before.
2nd line....As you'd touch my heart deep in it's core, that every single day im craving for you more and more.
3rd line....with you on fire you'd make a rapper like me to settle down and retire just by admiring and to adore


yo right now the shit u got up there jus looks like a paragraph

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So what chicks can rap too/
you just won't battle me cause i can beat u/

Respect List:
AKA (down, and keepin it real)
KoObOo (A true friend wouldn't be the right words)
The Disciple (mmmm Tight probbly wouldn't be the word) lol
Tony Montana (thiz my main boi for rapping)
Ciara Myst (hey if u cant beat em', join em')
phatom (he jus got skill)
LivenLegend ( thiz my friend for life)
fluidmoon (she got ova half ya'll beat)