I thought It was pretty dope.

I think you could improve on how you word things tho, People here don't really usually take any OM's in slang seriously.

By that I mean sayin 'Yo Dis Is Da Reason I kill Bitchs Dat Hit ME '

Wateva shit I dunno.

But you got some potential tho, I can sense it,

Stick Around, keep droppin, you'll improve lots.

Just Stick To What you do, Ignore The haters Man.

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