ight first of all you were very emotional with threw out vocab threw the whole verse very good lines perfectly stucture and the flow was good...i liked the style and the creaticty you had to your lines very well done verse....keep doing your thing and you'll get better....i was feeling the verse more to the end then the top tho....but it was all good, good verse...

holla at me if you want to collab some time...you got talent...