Thread: I've Tried
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Old 01-17-05, 02:20 AM   #11
Diversity
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nice drop, alot of expression through these words,
flow was str8 liked it alot but the content i liked even better, one paragraph that caught my eye was this...

Quote:
I was told I will one day be over you.
Hope it's true. Finally living without you.
When I mend. Will life reach perfection?
Will I learn my lesson? Go the right direction?


I like that line right there.. id have to say this peice was pretty damn solid nice drop hope to read more of your ish...

stay up, Peace...
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