id have to agree with untraceable, not bad for what its worth, but theres alot more you can do with this, Express some more emotion, fix up your structure a bit and put some heart felt words into it. just seems like you was struggling for expression, thats cool all of us do. neway work on it and shit will all be good...

neway keep droppin, stay up...

Peace...

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