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Old 01-17-05, 10:19 AM   #52
Dex
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Voted For: Reloaded

one sided really.

Hang-man: i wasnt feelin ya verse at all man. The punches seemed weak. Some good multis and good attempts at metaphors. Structure and flow seemed off and wasnt brilliant to read. Good attempt but keep elevating bro.

Best Bar: "foot to the jugular, put in ya place, you a punk
only time you got out ‘da hood, it was straight to the trunk"

Worst: "fuck assumptions, there’s nuttin to argue, ya soft
left the gat at home, I came packin barbeque sauce"


Reloaded: Good verse. Real good. Your punches were hitting hard with good effect, personals in there, metaphors coming at him hard too. Honestly heavy verse. Seems somewhat wasteed tho against his verse, you could have won this with half the talent used in this battle.

best bar: "ill try to be descrete, your the rv's pitbull, for that i think mad dog's gonna bite,
little faggot, i spit rhymes for fuel, ill spit all on you then get the lighter, ignite." -Not 100% sure this was the best bar cos it was all good.

worst: none
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