i'll leave my opinion away from the feedback, and point out some facts

content was deep, seems like you took your time to write this.. and it shows.. there's a nice flow to this.. flow was nice, structure was str8.. i'm sorry but i ain't feeling you naming the dude, Nigga.. but this is your OM so you can do w/e lol.. but the thing that kept me reading was the fact that you made a message outta it.. so keep writing and do yo thang, mos def..

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