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Old 01-17-05, 03:09 PM   #26
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Voted For: JaeBurnz354

i gotta give this one to jae burnz because his punches were just better but rapverse almost took this one. Had rapverse been able to come up with a better opener for that "watch as jae burns" punch he'd a won because both verses had holes in their punches. rapverse's 5th and 6th lines were weak as were alot of jae's punches. you both only had 4 good lines to me but jae's 4 were better than rapverse's 4

Nobody is layed back, I'm especially fierce here...
Ya style has lyrica gaping hole like pierced ears/

There that should give you more of a punchline...
I'ma leave u liek six packs, when it's crunchtime/(Hurting)
and

Man this is stupidity. he wants to win?? He-just-can't.
There's more shit in his verse than sewage treatment-plant

I'll beat the man, he's in Dan-ger, I make this gay-hurt
only by spittin pure fire and watching as 'jae-burns'

Like i said had rapverse been able to spit that jae burns joke better he proly would've won but i have to give it to jae burnz
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