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Old 01-17-05, 04:07 PM   #11
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Voted For: Adrenaline

Adrenaline-Ok kid um, nice verse, with some good punches and good wordplays. Meta'z i seek in your verse was nice. Punches were very effective. Flow was chopped up in some places, elevate on struture ok.


Hotstudalrt- Ok, kid. You had Very bad verse. Flow was chopped,made it hard to read. Punches "eh" wasnt that good homie. Elevate. Wordplay, i seeked them in your verse but wasnt good.




overall-This goes hands down to Adrenaline, cause he had better flow with some good punches. Wordplay was good, meta'z also. Still elevate on struture fam, the flow was chopped up in some places. Hotstudalrt, sorry to tell you, but you lost this battle. You had horrible flow, fix your struture. Punches werent that good. Wordplay I did seeked in your verse, but still wasnt good enough to pull the victory.


peace.
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