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Puttin MD On The Map
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Voted For: Death
i have to go with death on this battle
death, its time you reloaded your gun and set a viper to bite,
you sold me your profiles, with wank records cos you know your shite,
^^weak...decent wordplay with shit-shite
you reseted it, you lost about 15 and won about 4, isn't that plenty,
two profiles one from atlanta and one from england, he doesnt have an identity,
^^stretched madd.....good personal though
your a fucking rookie, even elevating seems unreachable from your veiw,
making a thread saying i got 500 posts... but people still know your new,
^^eh decent personal
you probably wont make the deadline, he asked till wednesday to finish,
i can tell your gonna write wack, it's overconfidence, that thinks your gonna win this,
^^NO...horrible punch
youve battled two newbies, to get your undefeated record, you should'nt have give me the pass,
this fam will, die from shock, to see his own profile own his own ass.
^^weak
you didnt come that hard....your punches couldve been more thought out............you need to up ur vocab.......and you did have good personals......but you flow fell off........and you had horrible structure......
dog why do it........you know you cant see me/
im bout to cut you up and pass you around like thanksgiving turkey/
^^decent punch.......coulda been worded better
ill leave dis nigga dead under a white sheet/
you "duck" more than a bitch in the streets(gun fire)/
^^good punch......
its simple come on dog get at me/
how you gonna "reload" when your already on empty/
^^nice personal and humerous a lil
my flow flows like water and will sweep your ass away like a flood/
your verse is just like a malfunctioning granade.....a dud/
^^good punch but the self glorify brought it down some but you made up for it in the second line
no way you were gonna win this battle anyway at any rate/
nigga named death done already ripped your ass and sealed your fate/
^^self glorification=lame......but this was decent
in this you had better structure.......your flow was better............you coulda came with more personals....... better punches....but you need to up your vocab as well.........and get rid of the / after the lines please its herbish and ppl dont like seeing it.....
ive seen better from the both of you.......this wasnt that good a battle but it goes to death for better flow, structure and punches.....reloaded had better personals
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