Gods Of War! -yeah im one
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Voted For: Ruffridah187
Voted: Ruffridah -cos i think he really had it up in his verse.
dj em cee: your opener was real good man. that kicked ass. His was also real good tho so i think they came off even in my eyes. Your vocab was good and the bar was clever and entertaining. Closer was good but to be honest with you i think you tried too hard to get in the good vocab you forgot about making it a really good hard hitting punch. It definately wasnt. Overall ya verse was good, had good vocab selection of words generally used well. Lot of metas in there and some good punches that didnt seem to come off very personal.
Ruffridah187: Won this battle for sheer entertainment level and selection of hard hitting punches that were personal and definately hitting him where it hurts. there were no problems with ya vocab and ya metapjors were used well. Good verse bro. Good things could come of you.
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