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Old 01-17-05, 05:53 PM   #13
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Voted For: d.j em sce

Ruff- You had some basic lines, punches were good. Words was basic. Flow was chopped up in some places. Wordplay didnt see any. I did seeked personals (dissing his rec). Punches was good, words was just too basic.


Dj- Alright the opener, you started talking about your-self. Punches Throughout the verse was good, and decent. Flow was good. Wordplay with punches was decent. Personals was "eh" ok, (dissing his writings saying its basic).




overall= wack ass battle, both heads needs to elevate. Ruff you had some good punches with "eh" ok wordplay. Words was just too basic, meaning your punches was basic. Dj stop glorifying yourself, when you do openers hit at your opponent not talking about yourself. You had good punches, with sgood flow. Add some more personals in your verse. You still got it with harder punches. Ruff your punches was basic, not really effective. sorry. no hate.


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