Voted For: d-cËpt!0n

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D-ception......
the first thing i noticed about your verse was the vocabulary.....you used nice vocab all throughout the verse.....every bar was good ( at worst decent ) and you never fell off...the whole verse was consistent.....it was very deep and i was feelin it....structure was good...decent multis in there....overall it was a very solid verse


Xcell.................
dont capitalize your letters....it makes it annoying to read for me......you should have upped your vocab throughout the verse....it definitely wasnt a strong point.....your concepts were good as far as the topic goes....but i felt like they could have been worded better....your structure was messed up the way you had some bars in 1 line....thats not good....it was a decent verse i just felt like you could have came better


overall..............
dception wins this with better vocab, structure, and consistence.....i just felt his more than i did xcells.....xcells wasnt complex enough........return the favor.....links in sig

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