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Old 01-17-05, 10:19 PM   #7
50hater_killer
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Voted For: Black Queen

she came harder and she was easier to read on this one. she rhymed more and ur lines where just to stretched homes no hate tho and most of all her opener-closure was better,
she had more multis better vocab more wordplay and structure was better.

opener-black
closure-black
multis-black
personals_black
vocab-black
over all black


queen
I don’t mean to be cruel, but I don’t even need to half-ass
Nobody really cares about your ass like a GED English class
Im takin this, so make like cannibal snakes and swallow your end
I mean how all the vets left, we just hope you follow the trend
Truth is my sound is ill, but nobody wants to hear ya flow
You been on the net forever faggot!.and still got nothin to show?
How can these faggots be ill?..all the textees he beat were new
And quit talkin about amounts of skill, THATS between me and you
Its torcher what im doin to this herb, Ive already topped ya diss..
Even judged by motivational speakers ya still wont get a vote of confidence
His net presence in text is a shame time to take you outta the limelight
Cuz you been exposin more 'gay bars' to us than San Fransico nightlife

8/10

no

Chick Has "No Sense Of Reality", Dis Bitch Beatin N.Verses?...C'mon Sis*
Da Queen Clearly Has No Respect Fo "Hip Hop", So Her Ass Voted Fo Skriptz*
Similar Traits?...Na Ma Im Da "Red King", Is Dat Familiar To Ya
Cuz Even Da Girl In Ya Sig Symbolizes "Murder" Fo Ya*
Enough Wit Da Sharades, Claims She Ko's All Bitches But Yet She's "Laid"
Ma, To Tell Ya Da Truth, A "Black Queen" Only Means Sumfin Wen Playin Spades
6-0? Impressive...Na Try 19-4....Broke Dis Whore Reference Dat Used To Reside In Authentik Intelligence
Now Unless U Condaleeza Rice, I Don Understand How A Black Queen Is In A "Twizted Government"
Face Facts Ma Even In The Card Game's U Play, Da King Ranks Higher Than U
Traitor?...Hell Yea, She Played C.A.L.I Mad Nuff, But Noe She Want In On His Crew

6.5/10

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