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Old 01-17-05, 11:33 PM   #14
.Ike.
Ike
 
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This was feedback posted for C.A.L.I

IP:

honestly this was a close battle...........

CALI...........
Herbish faker damn perpatraitior yous a 'Sonic' groupie
'Datruth' you couldnt smoke a herb in a chronic movie!!(1)
nice opener...set up line was a good personal...all around good bar

Occupations listed as 'Grilling Mathafuckas' ......damn yous a loser(2)
Bow to to my 'Godlyness' my 'Disciple' you from the land of 'Hoover'(3)
good wordplay here.....good personals

'B' you 'Dizzy' think i would just give you a win(4)
Ya records like old rims...............no spins!!(5)
another good personal....hit pretty well

'Fuxjustaword'.....well it is till i 'Fux' 'Fux' up with verbs
Cuz 'Fux' just a 'Fux' up 'Fux'ed up 'Fux'ing computer nerd
good play off of name....

This real 'Easy' for 'E' no wonder you changed ya sig picture(6)
Ya verse is looking 'BAD BOY' and i aint talking bout 'Big' wit ya
good personal in set up line.....2nd line was simple but it worked and hit good


fuxjustaword.................
CALI thinks he's ahead me, his old avvy thinks he beheads me
the "king of Beef' ? I know! we've all heard about Wendy's
good personal....nice opener....

So it tempts me, to see if u "bite," wen u've got more beef than fuckin cattle
Don't look back after dumpin shit? so ill be the only one to up this battle
nice punch and personal.....set up line was weak though...2nd line was nice

Givin u parkinson’s, ur left shook and rattled, thats y u have no precision or aim
cuz in this battle, ur punches land farther apart than ur location and name
nice....prolly your best bar here

cmon mayne, u even think ur a n****, i figure uve got ur freckles mixin with facts
but to step back, its no suprise, wen u have the whole site "listed" as black"
good personal........

atleast a job "well done" with the "beef" there, but nothin surrenders my brew
and wit my "raw" lyrics ur chances are "rare",....................
.................................................. .........cuz my punches'll tenderize you
pretty nice closer here....



structure- tie
personals- CALI....both had nice personal in just about every bar....but calis were more complex so i had to give this to him
punches- tie



pretty much this was an even battle except for complexity....so cali gets this with complexits in my opinion.....good verses from both of you.....return the favor.....link in sig




dammit.....not enough posts to vote....fuckin shit i wrote all that bull shit for nothin....well im postin it anyways just for feedback on the battle.......FUCK IM PISSED.....lol
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