Voted For: Scene

close battle.........
punches- nemesis had punches but pleim u lacked punches, work on dat
personals- pleim by far and how did u get dude's pic but wat eva
structure- both were easy to read
closing- it came down to dis and i think N had da betta closing. Pleim urs was kinda weak

v/nemesis

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