was good man i liked it defo.

Ya multis were being rocked hard and fast with great effect. I saw a few metaphors and a some multi-meanings in there. Flow was cool. Structure was good. This made it easy to read and pleasing to follow. Spelling a bit off on some things. Mostly i noticed "sunamaie" (Tsunami) -This was quite blatant but a good verse. Always know its good wen the only real problem was spelling and wen your getting ya stuff typed quickly you aint got time to worry bout the spelling.

Other than that, the only other suggestion i have is that if you put in a couple of little lines to make us laugh or at least snigger. -Only two or three it would be tip-top-notch! But then it wasnt really about that, it was more of a big-up-yourself piece.

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